I am not very much sure if i do any mistakes in my writing. I have used simple language in the paragraph that was given.I have tried my best to provide the correct information with the help of my previous research on the topics I have mentioned in the essay.
My essay is divided into two parts. In the first part I have mentioned the main ideas of the topic and the sources I have used. In the second part I have provided the correct details for the topics that are mentioned in the first part. In the second part I have added the correct details that were Sushi เครดิตฟรี 30 ไม่ต้องฝาก ไม่มีเงื่อนไข ถอนได้ไม่อั้น necessary.
For example in the first part the first paragraph contains the general ideas of the topic and I have used the main ideas that were given. But then in the second part when I talk about the correct details I had to mention that these details are true facts. I have mentioned many such details in the second part.
I am not saying that I do not have any mistake in my essay. My teacher has told me that I have made some mistakes and now I have to make some corrections and improve my writing skills. So now I have to take help from many teachers and improve my writing skills. So I think I will have to work on my English Language in my next academic year.